This is a heart break song. Still working out the lyrics a bit and recorded as a demo instead of full band. But wanted to share it and see what you think. Appreciate any comments.
A well-written song, take the plunge and record it to commercial quality. It's great, lyrically and melodically My only suggestion would be to vary the 'meet me out for coffee' line. Maybe 'Let me treat you to an ice-cream'or something along that line to give a little variation in each chorus.
by Brent Lillie on February 4, 2009 at 3:01 AM EDT
i love songs with just vocals and keys they let u either be good or awful , brother this is good
Comments for Do It Right
Beautifully written song, with great flow. Not sing song rhyming. Nice clean and sparse arrangement with nice balance.
OLE GA.BOY,BILL
Best of luck in the competition
Sincerely
Marshall_C
My only suggestion would be to vary the 'meet me out for coffee' line. Maybe 'Let me treat you to an ice-cream'or something along that line to give a little variation in each chorus.