Arrangement is good but I hate your usage of copywritten material.
Loose the copywritten stuff and hire a vocalist.
I'll direct you to several if you'd like
This is a great music bed save your sample usuage
Ditch it... Go for gold. Do EVERYTHING ORIGINALLY!!! Its in your blood... Why you @#$%ing off
Rap is solid. Get a skinny sexy bitch on vox and loose the 50's crap though. Save that for an established producer
We wanna see what you can do on your own... Which based on the bed, is a lot, but not enough aparently being you're leaning on established material to sell your own sound
Comments for Crushed Dreams
Nicely melodic -- not overkill...
Meh.
Arrangement is good but I hate your usage of copywritten material.
Loose the copywritten stuff and hire a vocalist.
I'll direct you to several if you'd like
This is a great music bed save your sample usuage
Ditch it... Go for gold. Do EVERYTHING ORIGINALLY!!! Its in your blood... Why you @#$%ing off
Rap is solid. Get a skinny sexy bitch on vox and loose the 50's crap though. Save that for an established producer
We wanna see what you can do on your own... Which based on the bed, is a lot, but not enough aparently being you're leaning on established material to sell your own sound
Stop it.
really nice