New York Mills Project Video

I enjoyed this video a great deal. It's a relatively simple idea taken to extravagent proportions- which I love. A lot of work went into this video and it shows.

I would suggest that in your next video- try to vary the camera's perspective more- different shot types and camera angles. Maybe some overhead perspectives and floor level shots would be advantagous. Also- the sound of the objects as they fall is a big part of the appeal of this and it seems that you only used the built-in camera mic to record the sound. A good directional mic as close to the action as you can get would help to highlight that aspect of the kinetic art. You might also want to work a Rube Goldberg angle into it such as having the chain of events culminate in an absurdly simple result such as- I don't know- a dog biscuit dropping into a poodle's mouth. Something that would give it a good punchline at the end. One more comment: The meaning of the initials (what was it "T.F."?) was not apparent until the end and didn't really have any meaning to anyone but you- so I would suggest dropping that aspect of it

Anyway- I hope you find my comments helpful. That is the spirit in which I offer them. Again- nice job. Very enjoyable video.

This is an awesome and interesting acting video. These girls are really strong in acting. In action film, they really have different ways and look, like its good with girls putting there hair down, it helps the video. This is a very interesting video. The guns look real. Also they have interesting clothing/ fashion in this video.