Nice, I like it overall, but... Intro at 25 sec is too long, and needs a stronger hook. Not much lyrical development, either... no "story" that I could make out.
'I'm Never going home'...Oh yeah! I can totally relate to this; as I have continued to see myself slamming the gaits which hold so-called PARADISE in front of me. The things I see, the voices I hear I wish, I wish they would just all disappear into their locked in eternity.(some of my own lyrics to your song)! We're searching for, we're searching for, we're looking for, looking for something much better than what we had before.
by TraceyLynn66 on February 23, 2011 at 9:13 PM EDT
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agree with Thomhill.
From the 120 songs of the specialty finals in may this song is in my top 20.
That water sound effect makes me want to bite a plum
awesome.. clean production
I like this track. Reminds me of 'Sexy Boy' by Air.
I was upset my song didn't keep #1 but I'm glad that this one of most of the others, made the spot. This is really good ;)
tight little electro pop song