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by Jaymie Gerard

Suddenly the city sidewalks seem much colder, especially when your window shades are drawn. Sitting in your bedroom feeling older, contemplating "should have done" Here the fire steals the light, push the wire through the pipe, here the edge of the knife is cutting lines...

Uploaded: November 23, 2008

Duration: 3m 32s

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I think this is quite a good song with lots of potential. I would thicken up the guitar chords in the choruses as well as add some harmonies to the main vocal line, particularly the second time through. It just needs some build, a dynamic pay off at the end. Nice song though.

by Coulon on January 10, 2009 at 9:32 PM EDT

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