Ok. Vocalist should be more clear and present in the mix always, mastering needs to come up, you need to replace your pads with actual melody arps working there way into awesomeness
I like the vocal takes... But feel you missed the shot to really rape her talents at play. Its a very monotone delivery... Which works fine if the music is up to par, but the music is only average and doesn't offer anything unuiqe that I've never heard before.
You get the better in a two person showdown... But need to work more elements into your production. Vocal effects, glitching, gated breaks, the works.
You're also in need of a musical hook. You set a stage nicely but never sell me.
Comments for Loveless
the voice is perfect. Nice track
I like it, the centre of the track is the voice and the voice is cool and well arranged
compliments
cheers
Has a haunting ambiance.
Ok. Vocalist should be more clear and present in the mix always, mastering needs to come up, you need to replace your pads with actual melody arps working there way into awesomeness
I like the vocal takes... But feel you missed the shot to really rape her talents at play. Its a very monotone delivery... Which works fine if the music is up to par, but the music is only average and doesn't offer anything unuiqe that I've never heard before.
You get the better in a two person showdown... But need to work more elements into your production. Vocal effects, glitching, gated breaks, the works.
You're also in need of a musical hook. You set a stage nicely but never sell me.