I don't know why Judge Shelly is apologizing for stating the obvious. You're not killing it, and it also sounds like you're trying to copy Carl Thomas. You wanna copy someone, copy someone great like Ray Charles...you know, someone REALY SOULFUL!
Sounds mellow and smooth, but if you were standing in front of me I wouldn't feel your emotions or past struggles...I would love to see you hit the punch lines a little stronger...You have the range to do so on this particular track...I am by no means hating...I think you should strive for excellance...Real Talk
by Judge Shelly on November 14, 2008 at 1:53 AM EDT
Very nice! Glad I listened beyond intro. I would buy your stuff love to hear more and great production.
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