PlayLike a Riverr James Ralph Toppins

I wrote this song a few years ago when my father died, to help understand and cope with the inevitable. I play all the instruments the first times I have played bass guitar and lead guitar. My hope is that you will take the time to listen to the song in its entirety and if I might be so bold as to ask that you give a small review as to what I might do to make it better. This would be very helpful. Thank you, Ralph