Raw Black Veil Brides Cover

this is a very raw and limited edited of my cover of the Black Veil Brides song Knives and Pens. This is about the 40th take (my neighbors hate me), and yes my voice was starting to go out. but another and edited version will be up in about a week. for now jus leave me some comments so i know exactly what to fix. instramental done by zac11114 on new grounds