PlayLovely Girl

The song has a great backbone. I like the Stevie-ish breaks and the guitar tones are ALMOST there. Aside from strumming chords like an acoustic on an electric, throw more tasteful licks in.
The tune can use a better mix with some vocal production as well. nice backbone. Keep working on it!

I dunno, I rather enjoyed it the way it is - nice job!

I think I would record this song one more time, the lyrics are great, the music is kicking, and the breaks are cool, but it lacks just a little bit of performance energy (Not being critical, I think this is a number one) if it had a little more drive. It could be platinum.