Another Song

This is the first of my many songs that I've actually put with music; a very rough demo which I know is quite apparent. It's a very dark, emotional piece about losing someone I loved and the music is played down to let the lyrics stand on their own. I really would just appreciate any feedback because I want to know how well my kind of writing sits with any possible fan base. I encourage everyone to look past the lousy production of it and judge it by its meaning!!